Posted by : David Guyll September 12, 2015
During the first session the players brought up various third-party classes, some of which I'm sure they regret purchasing. Now there are plenty of terribly designed third-party classes out there, but two stood out the most.
The first apparently allows you to instantly kill anything so long as you take a specific "background" and advanced move at 2nd-level: you spend a point of currency to wait for them to fall asleep, let their guard down, or otherwise become defenseless/helpless, and then use the advanced move to instantly turn them to dust.
Now you might think there's a chance you can fail, but any result on said advanced move turns them to dust, even a miss. The only way something bad can happen is if you specifically choose for something bad to happen (two options are benefits, the third prevents a situation from happening which might not even be possible), or maybe if you roll a miss (the GM can at least try to figure out something bad), but that's only after your target is literally dusted.
And that's just if you want to kill something. Using just the background and starting moves, it's possible to easily escape nearly any calamity you could imagine, or achieve nearly any goal you want with no risk: you just spend the currency (which you then immediately regain), and keep doing it until the danger has passed or you've escaped from it.
Something else I noticed was that, in addition to numerous fictional contradictions, you can also, again based on a single background choice, move anywhere you want before anyone can react, constantly notice things to your advantage, and always defy danger using your best stat (whether or not it makes any fucking sense at all).
(Another criticism was that said class, as well as related ones feel like they were all made purely for money. Given the overall poor quality and experiences "interacting" with said creator, this is a sentiment I agree with.)
The other class has a starting move that lets you, among other things, transform other creatures or put them to sleep at the start of the game. You have to roll, but the miss just makes you choose something from a list, and the person knows that you did something (which will probably not matter once they're a harmless animal or asleep).
Run into a dragon? Use the move and turn them into a fish, or put it to sleep and stab it in the head. If it wakes up, just use the move again. The only restriction is that you have to spend a sort of currency, and you regain said currency whenever you're exposed to something, or do something you're not supposed to.
Just pick something commonplace (like, I dunno, iron, which is pretty mythologically appropriate for said class), and just have a character expose it to you whenever you need the currency. Alternatively, you can also tell a lie or break a simple oath (neither of which carries any inherent penalties or consequences).
After several years of designing Dungeon World content, especially classes, I’m only kind of surprised by this sort of thing, as something that I've heard before is that the game just "doesn't care" about balance, or that balance isn't as important as it is in other games (like, say, Dungeons & Dragons).
I disagree. To be clear, when I say balance I'm not just talking numbers and niche protection. Both are related and important (and easy to get right with minimal if any playtesting), but a third facet to consider is, for lack of a better term, "fictional" or “narrative” balance.
Think moves like the bard's Unforgettable Face, which lets you decide if you've met someone before and take +1 against them, or the thief's Wealth and Taste, which lets you flash around something and choose who wants it (and will do anything to get it). These moves bug me, but at least they're tamer than the shit mentioned above.
I don’t think moves need to be perfectly balanced against each other. I don’t even think they can, as not all games are the same, some players are more creative than others, and some GMs are more relaxed in their interpretations/rulings. But, there’s a pretty big gap between having to actually roll to try track and creatures, and being able to construct entire houses, instantly, with no roll, at 1st-fucking-level.
Of course I have no idea if this sort of thing is being done intentionally or accidentally, though I suspect in many cases it's the latter: I could definitely see some creators trying to get their classes to better stand out by giving them moves that grant lots of narrative control, "cool powers", and/or just let them do certain things with little to no cost or even risk.
When You Want To Do Better...When Melissa and I design a class or moves, we don't adhere to tradition (like how all clerics have Turn Undead), or start with a catchphrase first and shoehorn the move into it later (the immolator's Sick Burn, and another class's Rags to Riches). We also don't create moves that are so easily abusable, especially without any kind of strategy or drawbacks, or impose fictional absolutes that might defy reason.
We start with the fiction/lore/narrative/whatever you want to call it, designing the move so that it does whatever it needs to do. Then we look at other classes to best ensure that the move works/makes sense, but that all the moves taken as a whole doesn't overshadow another class in the process, or let players do utterly insane things, like flee from virtually anything or instantly kill people no matter what they roll (if they even have to roll).
If it does, we tweak it until we find a middle ground in the "fiction" and function.
For example, during our research phase for The Oni we found that they can turn invisible, though we were never sure what their limits were, if any: could they just turn invisible and rip people apart? Maybe, and I'm sure there are would-be designers out there that wouldn't hesitate to permit that, but frankly without some limitation or drawback that's just too damned good.
A wizard can cast invisibility at 1st-level, but it ends as soon as you attack, and the wizard can't cast any other spells while it's in effect. That set a good benchmark, and while we tinkered around with a roll-and-hold move (roll+CHA to gain 1-3 hold that you spend to do other things), in the end we went with this:
When you turn invisible to the naked eye, roll+CHA. ✴On a 7+, you can walk about without revealing your presence, and take -1 ongoing until you end the effect. ✴On a 7-9, choose 1.
- You are only invisible when you are not moving.
- You are spotted before you turn invisible, or something else betrays your presence.
- You take -1 ongoing to use mienai until you make camp.
If you attack someone, the effect immediately ends. Note that you can still be heard and smelled, and anything you touch or pick up does not become invisible.
You can only turn yourself invisible, you can't move very quickly, you're -1 ongoing to everything while you're invisible, and when you get a 7-9 there are additional problems that can crop up.
So, in a party with both an oni and a wizard, the wizard's invisibility spell can still have a use: you can drop it on someone else, they can move quickly about, and they can do everything normally. If you get a 7-9, you can opt to just lose the spell for the day.
A second example was waaay back when Melissa was writing The Pirate. One of the moves for one of the two included compendium classes allowed you to make a roll, and depending on the result could cause people to flee or surrender to you.
During feedback, a player stated that they didn't like it, because as written you could scare off or force anyone to surrender to you with one roll, whether a rank-and-file guard, a renown champion, a devoted priest, or even a dragon. We fixed it by having it cause one of several things to occur, but the GM got to choose what and who it applied to.
In this way the move was still useful, but the chances of something hilariously absurd, like a dragon surrendering to you for no good reason other than a lucky roll, were minimized.
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